Out of Water

It’s getting a little warm in here
I’m wondering is there heat somewhere near?

The animals are causing quite a  stir
I hope it’s not to warm with their fur.

I’m here to keep them warm at night
And safe as I can until daylight.

I fear something is definitely wrong
Hopefully someone will check before long.

It’s really getting hot in here
It’s a fire that I most fear.

My structure seems to be getting weak
It’s safety the animals seem to seek.

Oh finally the fire trucks have arrived
Now maybe everyone can be safe inside.

Oh dear, what did I hear them say
They are out of water on this terrible day.

The animals safety for them I pray
I can hear the horses as they neigh

No longer can  I hold this frame
I guess it is the lack of water I can blame


Contest:  Out Of Water
Sheri Fresonke Harper
2/17/15

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/18/2015 3:20:00 PM
YOu chose an interesting approach for the contest and we can see your heart here, that you love animals , for you are concerned about them in this poem! Cute rhyming!
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I do love animals. Janet
Date: 2/18/2015 10:32:00 AM
Who says walls can't talk? :) I love old houses and barns and I believe they do tell a story. If we listen with our hearts. Awesome write 7 Straight from Heaven!
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 4:36:00 PM
Thank you Ed. Janet
Date: 2/18/2015 5:43:00 AM
very good , it feels like your soul was there watching
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/18/2015 5:57:00 AM
Thank you Cynthia, Janet
Date: 2/17/2015 4:03:00 PM
Well written, not only did I feel bad for animals but structure as well. Good luck in contest. ;0)
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/17/2015 5:56:00 PM
Thank you Alesia. Your comments are greatly appreciated. Hugs Janet
Date: 2/17/2015 10:11:00 AM
sad poem Janet.. well written and great take on the topic.. I am still thinking about what to concoct... best wishes.. lov,nad!
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/17/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Nad, greatly appreciate your comments. Hugs Janet
Date: 2/17/2015 9:55:00 AM
Hey Janet, this is so well written. You have spoken well for a place of shelter. Well done. Be Blessed, Neva
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/17/2015 10:32:00 AM
Thank you Neva. Your comments are so appreciated. Hugs Janet
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