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You are cordially invited To a party on the moon! We’re not quite sure about the date, But relatively soon! In case you were wondering About how you should dress; Feel free to beam yourself aboard In your futuristic best. It’ll be light-years of fun, We’ll have a cosmic ball! We can all take selfies with the Earth And make ourselves feel small. It will last a lunar hour, Which is 1.13 days. It will be a first for earthlings, A total blast in every way! So if you think you’re brave enough To party on the moon, Our spaceship fits 500, So RSVP soon!

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Date: 8/6/2014 10:41:00 PM
NICOLE,, Congrats, on your win. <3 LINDA
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Date: 8/4/2014 10:30:00 PM
Great poem Nicole, well done and congratulations
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Date: 8/4/2014 1:24:00 AM
A clever approach to the theme of the contest, Nicole. congrats
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:16:00 PM
Now, I would have placed this much higher..you have a nice rhythm going..not to mention rhyme. congrats. BG
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:12:00 PM
Wonderful write Nicole ,, a brilliant take n a great win,, big congrats !
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Date: 8/3/2014 12:08:00 PM
I thought there would be no atmosphere with it being on the moon but this sounds fabulous LOL great win! Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2014 11:28:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest
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Date: 7/25/2014 7:01:00 PM
Dear Nicole: "Beam me up!" Very nice write. Leon
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