Out of This World

You are cordially invited
To a party on the moon!
We’re not quite sure about the date,
But relatively soon!

In case you were wondering
About how you should dress;
Feel free to beam yourself aboard
In your futuristic best.

It’ll be light-years of fun,
We’ll have a cosmic ball!
We can all take selfies with the Earth
And make ourselves feel small.

It will last a lunar hour,
Which is 1.13 days.
It will be a first for earthlings,
A total blast in every way!

So if you think you’re brave enough
To party on the moon,
Our spaceship fits 500,
So RSVP soon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 6, 2014 at 10:41 PM
NICOLE,, Congrats, on your win. <3 LINDA
Trichet Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 10:30 PM
Great poem Nicole, well done and congratulations
Mehta Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 1:24 AM
A clever approach to the theme of the contest, Nicole. congrats
Gorelick Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:16 PM
Now, I would have placed this much higher..you have a nice rhythm going..not to mention rhyme. congrats. BG
A. Sharma Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:12 PM
Wonderful write Nicole ,, a brilliant take n a great win,, big congrats !
Allison Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 12:08 PM
I thought there would be no atmosphere with it being on the moon but this sounds fabulous LOL great win! Hugs Jan xx
Konos Avatar
August 3, 2014 at 11:28 AM
Thank you for entering my contest
Enriquez Avatar
July 25, 2014 at 7:01 PM
Dear Nicole: "Beam me up!" Very nice write. Leon
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