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Out of the water


Out of the water

come's my emotion's

I am a care taker.

some day's it feel's 

like I am drowning.

I take care of my mother

you see,

watching her in pain and suffering

it just seem to consume me.

Out of the water

I try to take deep breath's

while thinking, why do the other

family member's seem to stay away,

don't they see I need help

with our mother today.

As I sit by her bed ,

I know they heard what I said!

Out of the water

it is the waiting  as a care taker

it get to be to much,

as the days go flying by

and not leaving the house

I get a  strange feeling

like lonely and out of touch.

I know when the day come's 

and her life will come to a end,

I will be sad to lose my mother

and my best friend.

Out of the water

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/4/2015 3:08:00 PM
Strong emotion, here, Sharlotte, you placed well. Thanks for entering this very popular contest, we had very many wonderful contributions. Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_bataan_641273 Read more at: http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/out_of_water_642576
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SHARLOTTE NEWAN
Date: 4/4/2015 3:29:00 PM
Thank you it feel so good to come to a place to release my feeling.
Date: 2/19/2015 3:00:00 AM
I'm not too sure if this is fictional or the truth. This is quite a sad write. Nevertheless I went through this once when my mother fell ill, she is now much better. All I saw was that friends/relatives become few when you are in need, do not dwell your strength on that, its life. Keep taking care of your mother, God is in control. xxx
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SHARLOTTE NEWAN
Date: 4/4/2015 3:30:00 PM
it is real I have taken care of my mom for 10 years since my husband passed away. I so glad I can lay my thoughts upon other poetry feet.
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SHARLOTTE NEWAN
Date: 2/19/2015 10:15:00 AM
Hi it is true and I do take care of my mom . I feel a lone sometimes. I know there many, many family's that can relate to my poem. One person is the chosen one to take it all on.