Notes About The Poem

Written March 5, 2026 for Out of Order Contest sponsored by Sara Kendrick

 

Out of Order PC

Out of order is my pc
Awful thing to happen to me

I try to judge poetry contests 
Impossible on iPhone I confess

Admin says soup made for computers
Makes me feel like a big fat loser

Indeed I lost fuchsia flexibility 
Lost files in my purple cemetery 

That’s where in my old files
I saved old trash poem piles

Poems gone before saved to iCloud 
They weren’t good but I miss them now

For they were like mind flowers
Some weak discreet some with power

I guess they are also like a diary
Full of secrets writes wrongs dreams

Out of order no television or pc
I’ve a phone a home and peace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your "wonderful" write. Hope you get better days. Have a blessed day with your win...............
Jones Avatar
March 9, 2026 at 4:07 PM
Thanks Paula! Blessings returned!
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 1:30 PM
I wanted to drop by and say congratulations on your name being on the winners' list in my contest. Thank you for participating in the contest. Way to go. Sara K
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 5:22 PM
I’m honored and grateful for my placement! Thanks Sara!
Onclaud Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 6:09 AM
well done, great mood, karen! soup mail!
Jones Avatar
March 8, 2026 at 7:01 AM
Thanks and ok
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 6, 2026 at 10:27 PM
loved each line...great entry
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2026 at 12:43 AM
Thanks for reading Sara!
Rodriguez Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 1:37 AM
Actually lit as hell
Jones Avatar
March 5, 2026 at 4:44 AM
Thank you William.
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