Out of My Window

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Through luster sight from the window, I grasp, an insight into hidden yearns and dreams glimpse of arcane hush, and ariose clasp Where the poise of nature's harmony gleams. The light softly embraces the lush green birds sing in sync, such as a heaven choir, flowers sway in the breeze, yield a whist scene, nature's smooth rhythms rise—to heap vibes higher. A slight haze drowned the early morning light, moonlight floods the room—a bright glow unlocks a quaint shroud veils the splendors of the night such a candle flame resting on wood blocks. Whisper of the lake, carried by light breeze barely shakes the swaying leaves of the trees...

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/3/2023 5:12:00 AM

a really beautiful sonnet, with some excellent use of language; i enjoyed reading this one - congrats on your win in craig's contest!

Craig Cornish

Date: 8/29/2023 6:54:00 PM

Thanks so much for your excellent poem and congrats!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 8/28/2023 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations Lasaad, on another fine poem that captures nature's "luster," "the lush green," its "poise." The scene described is truly idyllic. Best wishes, Brian

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/28/2023 3:23:00 PM

What a beautiful scene from "out your window," Lasaad. Truly an invitation to experience the profound beauty of the garden through the perspective of your talented pen touching life with the delicacy of beauty in your ever creative images! Congratulations on your win! So wonderful to share the podium together. Blessings dear friend!

Ink Empress

Date: 8/28/2023 12:26:00 PM

Your way with words is so introspective and deep and has a philosophical depth, which depicts so many life experiences , within those beautiful lines articulated with such profound imagery. I love the way youve written about how through your window you just dont see things but there’s so much more there. And also the descriptive way you have written this is truly soul warming! Loved this. Congratulations well deserved win. Deserve all the accolades

Aurore Severo

Date: 8/26/2023 11:02:00 PM

I loved this, I am not here often, so I was looking at your poems and picked one by its title, and not disappointed. I dream to have more time to spend here, but I work so much overtime, I just wanted you to know I enjoy your poetry.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 8/26/2023 8:54:00 PM

Such a poetic peaceful scene from your window. Such endearing thoughtfulness, Stunning imagery Dear friend.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 8/26/2023 4:00:00 AM

"Glimpse of arcane hush, and ariose clasp", " A slight haze drowned the early morning light", "moonlight floods the room" You've painted such vivid, lively and eloquent scenes in front of the reader's eyes.. Such an entrancing and whimsical sonnet that captures the scenes from daylight to moonlight, whilst conveying the depth of every moment. "Whispers of the lake, carried by light breeze" Ahh, so breathtaking, love this so much!