Out of My Window

Out of my window, I see emptiness. People throw their lives out into a bin to be looking for a big mess to put up with, where nobody will be searching for. Out of my window is nothing to look at, but bushes with no birds singing for tomorrow. Out of my window I see a new day full of gratitude and a new day is welcome to start with nothimg. Out of my window we find a new air to breath and change the wrong mistakes to open a new window to look at.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/15/2023 11:39:00 AM

Hello Maria, I look out my window i imagine I see a body if water,a bay. I see trees, some filled with berries for the birds to eat. I see the squirrels dashing about. Getting ready to store nut for winter. My friend, enjoy your day. Darlene\

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2023 3:49:00 PM

Hello Maria, I see a of of things outside my window. When it begins to get dark I see cat faces in the trees, and bushes. I see a blue cloud above it another pink. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/15/2023 12:21:00 PM

Hello Darlene. Thanks for passing by. I'm sure that out of your window is a lot to see. Here in this town we don' t have squirrels. Have a nice Sunday my friend.

Perry Campanella

Date: 8/15/2023 5:06:00 AM

Hello, Maria i gee your 'window' is much different from mine - I like - nothing to look at, but bushes with no birds singing for tomorrow - nice imagery - Good Luck - stay safe too - Thank You for this post!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/15/2023 5:28:00 AM

Thank you Perry. Glad you liked. Have a nice day!

The Situation

Date: 8/14/2023 5:42:00 PM

Emptiness. Must see the bricks in the next apartment. then write about the bricks.

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 8/14/2023 5:45:00 PM

Ok. .maybe you are right. Thank you