Out of My Window

Out of my window,
I see emptiness.
People throw their lives out
into a bin to be looking for
a big mess to put up with,
where nobody will be searching for.
        Out of my window
 is nothing to look at,
but bushes with no birds 
singing for tomorrow.
        Out of my window
 I see a new day full of gratitude 
and a new day is welcome 
to start with nothimg.
        Out of my window 
we find a new air to breath
and change the wrong mistakes
to open a new window to look at.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:39 AM
Hello Maria, I look out my window i imagine I see a body if water,a bay. I see trees, some filled with berries for the birds to eat. I see the squirrels dashing about. Getting ready to store nut for winter. My friend, enjoy your day. Darlene\
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 3:49 PM
Hello Maria, I see a of of things outside my window. When it begins to get dark I see cat faces in the trees, and bushes. I see a blue cloud above it another pink. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 12:21 PM
Hello Darlene. Thanks for passing by. I'm sure that out of your window is a lot to see. Here in this town we don' t have squirrels. Have a nice Sunday my friend.
Campanella Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Hello, Maria i gee your 'window' is much different from mine - I like - nothing to look at, but bushes with no birds singing for tomorrow - nice imagery - Good Luck - stay safe too - Thank You for this post!
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 5:28 AM
Thank you Perry. Glad you liked. Have a nice day!
Situation Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 5:42 PM
Emptiness. Must see the bricks in the next apartment. then write about the bricks.
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Ok. .maybe you are right. Thank you
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