Out of My Mind Again

Out of my mind again
November 6, 2013 at 6:59pm

Derelict time
Zone out
Of my mind
Fullness creeps
In to the smallest of spaces
Where it’s lingering
Fingering the waitress
As she smiles
And takes another order
Me to do something
That you never thought of before
Our time here
Is the thing that you wanted
For your own
Me but don’t ever discard me
Myself and I
Wish you were not about to say something
Might happen
If you do it again
No do it again
Yes don’t do it again
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May 21, 2014 at 6:39 PM
understading... and enjoyed....Linda
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May 21, 2014 at 11:44 AM
nice write very interesting
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May 21, 2014 at 11:46 AM
Hey thanks, Nathan.
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