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Out of My Head

Dont you ever wonder Just what life can be If only you knew the answer How easy it might seem You see, we are all prisoners stuck hopelessly inside our own skin we never know if what we know is worth the keeping in how can we be who we are if who we are is not we are all what weve created in hopes of being not just another person in an even more hopeless world our thoughts become our passions and passions are easily lost to who we know and what they know we affect our every thought a war of who who is better a war of endless hope a war to try to figure out if we are what we have hoped so tell me this with honesty and tell me this to see if you are you and i am me and we become what we cant be then how are we to live?

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Date: 12/3/2008 1:47:00 PM
This is so sad, and helpless it feel, like Diane said, God sent Jesus t set us free and we are free. Life isn't easy, but we aren't trapped forever. Wonderful write, and welcome to the soup! ~Michaela~
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Date: 12/3/2008 11:30:00 AM
aww this is quite a sad poem but a good wirte, yes we all prisoners in this hopless world but God sent Jesus to set us free, so through his blood we are justified so we have a hope and a future, our answer to all our lifes' situations is Jesus, we may be in the world but we don't have to be part of it, i am so Glad i got out, take care God bless from diane
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