Out of Joint

In case the mirror’s not enough,
Reminders of my age
May crop up just to let me know
I’m at a certain stage.

A lack of energy, perhaps,
Or slackening of skills,
More visits to the doctor
And a daily dose of pills…

A host of ailments never known
When in my younger years
And slowing down in varied ways
By giving into fears…

A memory I can’t quite grasp,
A stupid slip and fall,
An item on the must-do list
I simply can’t recall…

The knowledge of the ones I’ve lost
Who’ve passed or slipped away,
The hours sometimes hard to fill
When weather woes hold sway.

I really could go on and on
But think I’ve made my point.
This isn’t how I always feel;
Today I’m out of joint.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/8/2025 7:15:00 PM
Mirror, mirror on the wall. Who's the kvetchiest of them all? Mirror, mirror --- Ah, forget it. I am. lol. Ain't the golden years grand?! :) gw
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Date: 5/8/2025 4:26:00 PM
Love this. So relatable. I got a drop foot and need 3 different MRIs now to determine what is causing this neurological problem to my left leg. I can't even hop on it. So strange!!
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Date: 5/8/2025 12:37:00 PM
Ilene did you write this about me haha!! Absolutely spot on and so well written Ilene and think your poem speaks well for us aging folk hehe! rhymes beautifully! Debx
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Date: 5/8/2025 9:46:00 AM
There are joints that can be out of good working order, some that put one's nose out of joint, and there is the kind that hurts in a more physical manner. Ouch to those, Ilene. We can be out of joint both ways.
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