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Out of Joint

In case the mirror’s not enough, Reminders of my age May crop up just to let me know I’m at a certain stage. A lack of energy, perhaps, Or slackening of skills, More visits to the doctor And a daily dose of pills… A host of ailments never known When in my younger years And slowing down in varied ways By giving into fears… A memory I can’t quite grasp, A stupid slip and fall, An item on the must-do list I simply can’t recall… The knowledge of the ones I’ve lost Who’ve passed or slipped away, The hours sometimes hard to fill When weather woes hold sway. I really could go on and on But think I’ve made my point. This isn’t how I always feel; Today I’m out of joint.

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Date: 5/8/2025 7:15:00 PM
Mirror, mirror on the wall. Who's the kvetchiest of them all? Mirror, mirror --- Ah, forget it. I am. lol. Ain't the golden years grand?! :) gw
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Date: 5/8/2025 4:26:00 PM
Love this. So relatable. I got a drop foot and need 3 different MRIs now to determine what is causing this neurological problem to my left leg. I can't even hop on it. So strange!!
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Date: 5/8/2025 12:37:00 PM
Ilene did you write this about me haha!! Absolutely spot on and so well written Ilene and think your poem speaks well for us aging folk hehe! rhymes beautifully! Debx
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Date: 5/8/2025 9:46:00 AM
There are joints that can be out of good working order, some that put one's nose out of joint, and there is the kind that hurts in a more physical manner. Ouch to those, Ilene. We can be out of joint both ways.
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