Out Number

Your so far
An yet so close
My love for you will never seize
It will grow more each day
Beyond all I can see
Count the stars
My love will out number them
Count the drops in the ocean
And it will out number them
Count everything you see
And yet my love will still out number it....
Again your so far and yet so close,
I'll just write in another notebook.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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June 25, 2016 at 10:12 PM
And yet my love will still out number them... you are using infinite numbers to count everything. Use them instead of it. It sounds singular in this context. You are using plural for describing everything
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