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Out My Window

Graffiti on an old rusty train 
I see this through my kitchen window 
And globs of dripping dropping rain  
A field house light shines at night like a little flame 
There is a golf course beyond that mobile and decorated chain
Where established men play an old Scottish game

Electric wires above the tracks 
Held up by wooden pillars 
Bringing power from a building with soot covered smoke stacks
This vantage is strange to me
Who builds power station next to caddie shacks 
But this is the sight that I see


T.C Minisce 
9/12/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/29/2015 3:05:00 AM
Congrats x well done x Wendy
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Date: 9/29/2015 1:11:00 AM
Very wonderful take on the theme tyler! Congrats on a fantastic win!
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Date: 9/28/2015 11:07:00 PM
Tyler, Congrats in Bev Smith's, contest. Hugs **SKAT**
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