Out In The Garden

Parody of Up On The Housetop

Out in the garden flowers grow
but, its winter and there's snow.
Inside the oven cookies bake
all for the little ones to take!

Chomp chomp chomp this is good!
Chomp chomp chomp this is good!
Out in the garden flowers grow,
but, its winter and there's snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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George Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 1:26 AM
Beautiful, dear Miranda ! Your parody is so good. The smell of baked cookies will make children's mouth drool. Enjoyed this lovely ditty.
Hawley Avatar
February 8, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Baked cookies also make me drool. Thanks!
Dietrich Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 1:31 PM
oh I love this. It goes right along with the song it is parodying. I hope it got a win.
Hawley Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 3:17 PM
Thank you for that.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:48 AM
I'm familiar with your song and your parody is very good.
Hawley Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:06 PM
I hope you sang along with this parody, and I am glad you found it very good.
George Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 10:51 PM
Such a cute little rhyme! Greatly enjoyed, dear Miranda.
Hawley Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:06 PM
Thanks, and glad you found it cute.
Crandall Avatar
December 9, 2024 at 9:27 PM
Cute one Miranda, Chomp Chomp Chomp, this is good!
Hawley Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:05 PM
Thank you!
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