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Out

Out of order,
Out of control.

 Out of sight
 Out of mind.

Out of money,
Out of time.

Out of sight
 Out of mind.

Out of bounds,
Out of work.

Out of sight.
Out of mind.

Out of tune,
Out of touch.

Out of sight
Out of mind

Out of patience,
Out of love.
Out of love,
Out of love.

Out of sight
Out of my mind.

By:  Carole O’Terry Duet; Copyright: 3/19/2018; “All rights reserved”

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Maria Williams Date: 3/21/2018 2:13:00 AM Carole although I love your poetic words my dear I cant help but feel the sadness lacing through it. I love Air Supply and this particular song, very fitting for the lines of yours. I tend to agree with Silent though, there is love out there. Will come knocking when you least expect it, cheer up sweetie....Maria xox Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/21/2018 12:16:00 PM Thanks, Maria. I'm trying.

Vijay Pandit Date: 3/20/2018 6:51:00 AM Apt song to go with your poem..a sad but true message about life in your poem, Carole. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/20/2018 11:50:00 AM Thanks for your comment, Vijay. Carole

Silent One Date: 3/20/2018 6:30:00 AM the only way to heal a broken heart is to love someone who appreciates you Carole.. Lots of 'outs' there.. Login to Reply Carole Duet Date: 3/20/2018 11:43:00 AM Yes, I know, ZZ, but the only person who really loved me died. :( Carole