Carole Duet Poet Free verse

Out

Out of order,
Out of control.

 Out of sight
 Out of mind.

Out of money,
Out of time.

Out of sight
 Out of mind.

Out of bounds,
Out of work.

Out of sight.
Out of mind.

Out of tune,
Out of touch.

Out of sight
Out of mind

Out of patience,
Out of love.
Out of love,
Out of love.

Out of sight
Out of my mind.

By:  Carole O’Terry Duet; Copyright: 3/19/2018; “All rights reserved”

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Maria Williams March 21, 2018 at 2:13 AM Carole although I love your poetic words my dear I cant help but feel the sadness lacing through it. I love Air Supply and this particular song, very fitting for the lines of yours. I tend to agree with Silent though, there is love out there. Will come knocking when you least expect it, cheer up sweetie....Maria xox Carole Duet March 21, 2018 at 12:16 PM Thanks, Maria. I'm trying.

Vijay Pandit March 20, 2018 at 6:51 AM Apt song to go with your poem..a sad but true message about life in your poem, Carole. Carole Duet March 20, 2018 at 11:50 AM Thanks for your comment, Vijay. Carole

Silent One March 20, 2018 at 6:30 AM the only way to heal a broken heart is to love someone who appreciates you Carole.. Lots of 'outs' there.. Carole Duet March 20, 2018 at 11:43 AM Yes, I know, ZZ, but the only person who really loved me died. :( Carole