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Out of order, Out of control. Out of sight Out of mind. Out of money, Out of time. Out of sight Out of mind. Out of bounds, Out of work. Out of sight. Out of mind. Out of tune, Out of touch. Out of sight Out of mind Out of patience, Out of love. Out of love, Out of love. Out of sight Out of my mind. By: Carole O’Terry Duet; Copyright: 3/19/2018; “All rights reserved”

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Date: 3/21/2018 2:13:00 AM
Carole although I love your poetic words my dear I cant help but feel the sadness lacing through it. I love Air Supply and this particular song, very fitting for the lines of yours. I tend to agree with Silent though, there is love out there. Will come knocking when you least expect it, cheer up sweetie....Maria xox
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/21/2018 12:16:00 PM
Thanks, Maria. I'm trying.
Date: 3/20/2018 6:51:00 AM
Apt song to go with your poem..a sad but true message about life in your poem, Carole.
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/20/2018 11:50:00 AM
Thanks for your comment, Vijay. Carole
Date: 3/20/2018 6:30:00 AM
the only way to heal a broken heart is to love someone who appreciates you Carole.. Lots of 'outs' there..
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Carole Duet
Date: 3/20/2018 11:43:00 AM
Yes, I know, ZZ, but the only person who really loved me died. :( Carole

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