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James Peranteau

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Ourn Breath

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           Snap 
         Crackle 
            Pop 

Like the Fourth of July
    In this crisp cold
         his little 
       mine smile

      ourn breath
           met

Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2011

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Phyllis Babcock

December 1, 2011 at 10:43 AM

Sounds like the two of you are having fun either in the leaves or snow. Nice to share those moments and thanks for sharing with us. love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

November 29, 2011 at 6:43 PM

I wonder if their breaths ended in a kiss. You leave me wondering James, such a nice thing to do! :)

Poet Destroyer A

November 28, 2011 at 8:08 PM

James... lol... i love all the sparks here... ..Enjoyed;-) thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

November 28, 2011 at 2:42 PM

Sounds like a leaf pile to me, eh? Very seasonal, with life forces. Enjoyed especially. Love, daver

November 27, 2011 at 8:58 PM

Indeed, let's not forget. enjoyed this fun piece alot. Wishing you a great week James ~.~

Andrea Dietrich

November 27, 2011 at 3:59 PM

this is sure a fun read, James. I almost confused you with another james I know today!! Glad to see this recent posting of yours up!

November 27, 2011 at 7:41 AM

Interesting read...enjoyed .

Michael J. Falotico

November 27, 2011 at 7:07 AM

Very nice image my friend... very nice.. Michael

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