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Ourn Breath

. Snap Crackle Pop Like the Fourth of July In this crisp cold his little mine smile ourn breath met

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Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/1/2011 10:43:00 AM

Sounds like the two of you are having fun either in the leaves or snow. Nice to share those moments and thanks for sharing with us. love phyl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/29/2011 6:43:00 PM

I wonder if their breaths ended in a kiss. You leave me wondering James, such a nice thing to do! :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/28/2011 8:08:00 PM

James... lol... i love all the sparks here... ..Enjoyed;-) thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good night,.. always,..p.d.

Daver Austin

Date: 11/28/2011 2:42:00 PM

Sounds like a leaf pile to me, eh? Very seasonal, with life forces. Enjoyed especially. Love, daver

M.I.A .

Date: 11/27/2011 8:58:00 PM

Indeed, let's not forget. enjoyed this fun piece alot. Wishing you a great week James ~.~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/27/2011 3:59:00 PM

this is sure a fun read, James. I almost confused you with another james I know today!! Glad to see this recent posting of yours up!

Debra Squyres

Date: 11/27/2011 7:41:00 AM

Interesting read...enjoyed .

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/27/2011 7:07:00 AM

Very nice image my friend... very nice.. Michael