Our Wrinkled Faces

My love,my love
to you I shall forever be true
what do I feel ?
thoughts undefinable
they do stretch my mind
imagining our wrinkled face smiling back at one another
while we steal each other more time
my love,my love
to you I shall forever be true
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mckenzie Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 5:40 PM
This made me happy and smiling! Great write indeed! Laura :)
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July 22, 2009 at 9:11 AM
Got me smiling with this vision of lasting love. It's so nice to see long term couples with a spark to their relationships. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Have a good day! Karen
Brown Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 6:44 AM
beautiful description of long lasting love
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