Sandra Haight Poet Rhyme

Our World In Sync

Our World In Sync


We all dream of peace on earth...a lasting peace
when all wars no longer threaten, cease.
To live sounder lives, and drink
to a strengthened link:
all, from birth,
sync
with our earth;
live more kindly, think
how unrest and fear will shrink
when our hopes for brotherhood increase.
We all dream of peace on Earth...a lasting peace.


Sandra M. Haight

Form: Andaree
Syllables: 11, 9, 7, 5, 3, 1, 3, 5, 7, 9, 11    
Rhyme: a-a-b-b-c-b-c-b-b-a-a
First and Last Line Must Be The Same

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Geoffrey Brewer November 19, 2018 at 11:08 PM A very effective response to the challenge of this demanding format. Well done, Sandra Sandra Haight November 30, 2018 at 4:09 PM Thank you very much, Geoffrey! Sandra

Jack Horne November 9, 2018 at 3:35 PM love where you went with this Sandra Haight November 18, 2018 at 6:48 PM Thank you very much, Jack! Much appreciated! Sandra

Sand Blown November 9, 2018 at 12:12 AM very effective write Sandra Haight November 18, 2018 at 6:47 PM Thank you very much, Sand, for your visit and nice comment! Sandra

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart November 8, 2018 at 11:27 AM Wonderfully done Sandra! This should do well :) good luck! xomo Sandra Haight November 18, 2018 at 6:47 PM Thank you so much, Maureen! Hugs, Sandra

Chris Green November 8, 2018 at 9:57 AM Really nicely done Sandra. Best of luck in the contest Sandra Haight November 18, 2018 at 6:46 PM Thank you so much, Chris, for your visit and supportive comment. Sandra