Alex Adair Poet Rhyme

Our World

In a place full of technicalities,
And immorality,
Many search for financial immortality,

Few fight feelings of gravity,
Unable to agree with reality,
Another casualty, accepted casually,
Blind faith of causality?

Bad or good,
Yet not so simple,
Sword of shield,
Choice is instrumental,

Black and white, are details,
On track, not derailed,
Subliminal messages make things seem,
But where's the grey area in between?

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Beata Agustin February 8, 2026 at 11:32 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 10, 2016 at 12:17 AM Alex, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A July 5, 2015 at 2:08 AM Alex :) Wonderful poem, I enjoyed dropping by. Love SKAT

Vicky Tsiluma September 10, 2012 at 2:00 AM Nice write! Very insightful!

Carol Sunshine Brown September 4, 2012 at 11:34 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you this afternoon Alex. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Willie Wright September 3, 2012 at 6:41 PM A good poem and message.