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Our Wondrous, Dying Years

I lay claim. To the spaces between your breaths that hang suspended like dust in summer glare. I lay claim. To the corners ignored, in which your shadow glides beyond my feeble reach. I lay claim. To the fading spike of your laugh that leads me through our closed, unbuilt days. I lay claim. To the scraps of us that now stick and flutter on winter roads that once stretched for miles. I lay claim. To our solid silences that welded blood to shape, and sewed adoration to final, absolute pledge. I lay claim. To the story written, the history lived and the dreams that will all be swallowed whole. I lay claim. To these characters, these pages, these canyons between our lines that carry our wonderous, dying years.

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Date: 2/24/2024 9:19:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 8/22/2023 5:00:00 PM
Good golly you're good Nick. This should have gotten more attention. I think what happens to alot of poets here is they fail to interact. It is vital if you want to get noticed
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