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Our Wondrous, Dying Years

I lay claim.
To the spaces between your
breaths that hang suspended like
dust in summer glare.

I lay claim.
To the corners ignored, in which 
your shadow glides beyond my
feeble reach.

I lay claim.
To the fading spike of your laugh
that leads me through our closed,
unbuilt days.

I lay claim.
To the scraps of us that now stick 
and flutter on winter roads that once 
stretched for miles.

I lay claim.
To our solid silences that welded blood
to shape, and sewed adoration to final,
absolute pledge.

I lay claim.
To the story written, the history lived and 
the dreams that will all be swallowed
whole.

I lay claim.
To these characters, these pages, these
canyons between our lines that carry our
wonderous, dying years.

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Date: 8/22/2023 5:00:00 PM
Good golly you're good Nick. This should have gotten more attention. I think what happens to alot of poets here is they fail to interact. It is vital if you want to get noticed
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Nick Ravenswood
Date: 10/1/2024 3:09:00 PM
Hi Tom, I haven’t been on here for a while so when I finally logged back in and saw your feedback I thought I’d touch base. Firstly, thank you for the words of encouragement that means a great deal. Secondly, you’re absolutely right, I need to get better at reaching out. I’m a touch… sporadic at this online thing. Anyway, thank you again for your kind words. All the very best! Nick

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