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Our Winter Gazebo



Behold with joy, our flickering sky. together tonight!

See the colorful, myriad, dark islands of stars! 

Always holding sapphired, colored tomorrows of joyous mores.

But I, forever lost in the light rays of your own starry eyes.

Your face, such equanimity and angelic grace!

Let's stay like this, forever in frigid cold, till we become very old.

We, were enjoying the frigid winds, here, in our winter gazebo.

Shhh…let us slip into Aphrodite's darkness.

Truly, that is where our loving, eternal heart is.

In our beloved's sacred, eternal soul.

                   11/6/2024

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Greenhough Avatar
November 9, 2024 at 7:01 PM
I enjoy the romantic scene and loving warmth in spite of the cold. Well penned.
Romios Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 9:01 AM
Hi Hilda…love does conquer everything, does’nt it? Hard to believe it is already growing cold, to me it seems as though summer was yesterday. Where I live, there is no snow, but it gets cold at night and in the day, but nothing freezing. Weather is great here in California. Pangie xx
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November 9, 2024 at 12:53 PM
What a beautiful poem Pangie of life and love!....'let's stay like this forever in frigid cold until we become very old' now that's pure romance right there!! Love the poem and love the photo!! Debx
Romios Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 8:57 AM
Hello Deb M.. So glad you liked this one. Yes, the line you chose brings back memories to me, as well. Thank yuou for your visit! Pangie cx
Buhagiar Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 8:51 AM
A great illuminating picture with a wonderful poem. Loved it.
Romios Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 11:41 AM
Victor, a simple comment, that means so much to me! You are such a swwer friend! Pangie xx
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November 7, 2024 at 10:45 AM
Hi Pangie, your poetry warms my heart, love the picture as well. God bless.
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November 8, 2024 at 9:09 AM
That would be nice Pangie.
Romios Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 10:59 AM
Aww, John how sweet of you to say, I warm your heart, golly, thank you! Like you, I love the image! Wish I could jump inside the image! Hugs, Pangie x
Eagle Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 8:31 AM
A musical poem for today. Very enchanting and beautiful.
Romios Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Yes… A concerto to harmonius, star- studded,winter bliss! Hugs forever. Pangiexx
Lawrence Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 7:20 AM
….. Pangie This poem of yours … your deep words touched me deeply . So many emotions and visuals of a forever embrace of your entwined souls in the frigid winds . Thank you for sharing. I have missed your poems . Big hugs always, Susan :)
Romios Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 8:13 AM
Susan, how awesome to see you once more. Your comment is joyfuuly recived by a this humble poet. I missed yous as well! Iitry to write om all dubjects. I definitely avoid beind,crass or cheap.! I do write about real life. After all poetry is about beauty and truth. As of yet, I still am on earth! That picture of you is truly angelic,. Pangie
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November 7, 2024 at 5:59 AM
Lovely Pangie, the poem reads top to bottom, or bottom to top, perfect both ways… Beryl
Romios Avatar
November 7, 2024 at 8:01 AM
How sweet of you to say, dear one, Let ve, Pangie. Your poetry is exquiste and flows.lke liquid gold. Pangie xxx
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