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Our Victory

Very refined and also defined as a true woman, Intense feelings in my heart causes me to cherish each and every moment. Could it be that your nature kept my heart from being destroyed in the devil's fire? The looks of it you blessed me with courage to understand I'm not just a tool for hire. Only the sound of your voice could disintegrate the stress from hard it seems, Realizing the true potential of your continuing mending heart was well felt to the extreme. In a fashion the glow of your eyes brought light in this dark world that arose new hope, After acknowledging this feeling I could never see ourselves going through a grope. Joyous intensity surges through my body while I daydream about "our" life, Often I get surprise that my heart and mind never experienced a strife. Neither of us foresaw the emotions that allowed ourselves to go through, Every night that I hold you it feels as though our souls are doing a pas de deux. Simply knowing that I'll always have your love is enough to make me stay true to you like I already do...

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Date: 8/18/2010 8:49:00 AM
What a wonderful day to be reading poetry of others. I am so happy your poetry is among those I am reading this morning Darius. I wish you as I wish all my fellow poets the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. It is a pleasure to me to read my fellow poets poetry. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2010 4:12:00 PM
Your victory sounds sweet, they key is to stay strong, and look at the positives of all gracious and none gracious things in life,, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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