Our Valentine Trip

OUR VALENTINE TRIP

We are off to the seaside to play,
After all it is close to Valentine’s day,
What more could my husband say,
Than I love you , lets go splash and spray
By the sea,
Just you and me,
Forget everything back home for a while,
While we relax, love and smile!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Pandit Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Sounds like a wonderful plan. Reading your comments below, a well earned trip for sure. Happy Valentines day to you both! Relax..love..and smile..as you say. Have a great trip, Jennifer!
Proxenos Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 11:50 PM
Thank-you Vijay, we do and we will, thank you for you thoughtful comment. We only had a short break last year, so holiday overdue! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Mcconnell Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 2:00 PM
Nice penning Jennifer, supremely penned indeed! Sounds one a great trip . Blessings,Gordon
Proxenos Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 12:09 AM
Thank-you Gordon, you must know Umhlanga - a beautiful seaside resort north of Durban, love writing these type of poems, maybe that is the child in me! Poetry hugs and blessings to you also Gordon, Jennifer.
One Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 8:35 AM
Sounds lovely...
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 10:12 AM
Hi SO< Looking forward to the break. Have a wonderful Valentines day. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Raven Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 6:33 AM
Hi Jennifer, sounds like a wonderful time shall be had. Enjoy the break, both of you. A wonderful little poem that does bring the joy. Live the moments my friend. Have a wonderful Sunday and a wonderful break. Hugs....Mike. XX
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 6:44 AM
Thank-you Mike - we both really need this break - hope the 14th is a day to remember for you also. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 3:02 AM
Moments together are precious, enjoy your trip Tom.
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 3:21 AM
Hubby and I are together in our business but not together, each of us has different responsibilities so this trip is a treat! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Godwin Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Oh, how romantic and what a sweet, engaging poem. I hope this is true, it sounds romantic and divine. I'm assuming your sea waters are warm right now? (I know this stuff NOT, but ours are cold.) Anyway, I'll trade you my early box of chocolate for the seaside???? Ah, I didn't think so. Enjoyed, but not as much as you will! All the best ... CayCay
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 1:38 AM
Hi CayCay, sweet friend we are only going for 6 days - just a short break. We go to just outside Durban to a place called Umhlanga Rocks, an absolute dream! Longing for this break, and sorry no trade! Love and poetry hugs, Jenny
Gauthier Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 1:19 PM
A lovely perfect day, Jennifer.
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 1:32 AM
Line, how nice to hear from you, yes we need the break and it is about a 5-6 hour drive from where we stay. A great and awesome Valentines day to you also. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Kiser Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 1:14 PM
Sounds like a great trip. Happy Valentine's Day!
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 1:29 AM
We leave on Wednesday and come back the following Monday -I can't wait MLK, thank you for visiting. A wonderful Valentine's day to you too! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Allison Avatar
February 9, 2019 at 12:44 PM
aww how romantic Jennifer what a lovely rhyme:-) hugs Jan xx
Proxenos Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 1:26 AM
Thank-you for visiting and a lovely comment Jan I have a friend called Allison Jansen, and I have to concentrate not to call you Allison and her Jan! Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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