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skips...my heart skips each trip apart ripping all chips from shaking blades. fall...my tears fall as streams flow through breadth mountains above pain. erupt...our breaths erupt as volcanos spew passionate lava like fountains spraying life.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/2/2018 12:56:00 PM

Hello Sons,I enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice day my friend.

Sona Wilae
Date: 2/2/2018 4:56:00 PM

Thank you again, my friend.

Akkina Downing

Date: 1/4/2018 10:43:00 PM

Oh this is so good! And I second what Richard said below... stunning work Sona! Hugs and smiles :)

Sona Wilae
Date: 1/5/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thank you, dear.

Vera Duggan

Date: 1/4/2018 9:58:00 PM

Love this one Sona, well written my friend, take care.....Vera

Ricky Muse

Date: 1/2/2018 8:19:00 PM

This poem exists in its own space. It's own aesthetic ocean. Lovely.

Sona Wilae
Date: 1/3/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thank you, Richard.