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skips...my heart skips
each trip apart
ripping all
chips from
shaking
blades.

fall...my tears fall
as streams flow
through breadth
mountains
above
pain.

erupt...our breaths erupt
as volcanos spew
passionate lava
like fountains
spraying
life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 12:56 PM
Hello Sons,I enjoyed reading this poem. Have a nice day my friend.
Wilae Avatar
February 2, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Thank you again, my friend.
Downing  Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Oh this is so good! And I second what Richard said below... stunning work Sona! Hugs and smiles :)
Wilae Avatar
January 5, 2018 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, dear.
Duggan Avatar
January 4, 2018 at 9:58 PM
Love this one Sona, well written my friend, take care.....Vera
Evans Avatar
January 2, 2018 at 8:19 PM
This poem exists in its own space. It's own aesthetic ocean. Lovely.
Wilae Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Thank you, Richard.
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