Marilene Evans Poet Verse

Our Unspoken Hello

OUR UNSPOKEN HELLO


                             We walked 
                                         toward each other
                                                                silently

                              with my
                                      naughty smile 
                                             and
                                                  his smiley eyes


10/5/20     Writing Challenge - Septolet form     Constance La France

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Constance La France October 11, 2020 at 6:44 AM Marilene, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- Septolet with this wonderful poem _Constance Marilene Evans October 11, 2020 at 8:21 AM Thanks so much, Constance. I like your writing challenge. Funny thing was I wrote "Seasons Are A Changing" for your contest on 9/4/20. I entered it and for some reason it did not go through. I was a newbie to PoetrySoup, when I checked my poem entries, I did not see yours, so I was going to enter it again and found it was just closed. Oh, well...what a loss opportunity.

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2020 at 5:38 PM this one is FUN. Congrats here. Marilene Evans October 10, 2020 at 8:51 PM Thank you Andrea. Have a good week-end.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 10, 2020 at 1:13 PM - Great written, Marilene :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Marilene Evans October 10, 2020 at 8:50 PM Thanks, Anne-Lise. Have a great week-end.

William Kelii Kekaula October 5, 2020 at 8:18 PM Subtle passionate expressions underlies this entrancing execution, Marilene, best hopes truly, Aloha! William Marilene Evans October 5, 2020 at 11:11 PM Thanks, William! I truly appreciate it.