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Poetic Form: Terzanelle

Inspired: 2023 November 21

Image: Waikiki by Pixabay

Life on the windward side of our island, at times, the tradewinds persuade downpour, still, the sun light's gods and goddesses tanned. Sailboats adrift, surfers thrill life ashore, nightlife widespread mingling tingles aura, at times, the tradewinds persuade downpour, Fauna ground or inflight abound flora, gossamers swaying entertain loved ones, nightlife widespread mingling tingles aura, Albatross' solitaries north isle runs, regulars gadflies surrealists' gawking, gossamers swaying entertain loved ones, Infamy physicist Stephen Hawking, come visit a true Paradise like those, regulars gadflies surrealists' gawking, Cameras clicking smiling faces pose, life on the windward side of our island, come visit a true Paradise like those, still, the sun light's gods and goddesses tanned.

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