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Our Tears Mist Our Land

our tears mist our land
hawaii's ochre sky cries causing steaming roads to make our true fog
2020 February 29
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Adams Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 11:14 PM
vivid imagery...good one William :) hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 11:33 PM
Thanks, Sandra, for your kind sharing -- Aloha!~@wk
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