Our Teacher Rides On Her Broom

Our teacher rides on her broom
she levitates on it in our classroom
she will snap and  then deride
wish she'll take her pride for a ride!

Our teacher rode off on her broom
and there was joy in the classroom!

Our teacher came back from her ride
and all the students stirred inside,
"How do we rid her?" 
"We must decide!"

"There are students in other classrooms
that also ride as you on brooms"
"They need a guide!"
"They want your brew!"
"They can ride along with you!"
"They  can be your new crew!"

"Fly to them now, that's what you should do!"
" We won't miss you, we won't be blue ! "
"Fly to them now, that's what you should do!"


Copyright McCuen 2009

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/4/2010 6:13:00 AM
Ya know MC...your going places my dear poetic friend ! Your writes remind me of my writes of many moons ago. Keep on truk'n ! much love, james
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Date: 4/11/2009 12:21:00 PM
cute in a nice sort of way . i enjoyed it. but with the theme you could go a lot further and make it a masterpiece. the theme was original. jhl
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Date: 4/11/2009 7:31:00 AM
great rhyme...great poem, awesome poet. this piece is great keeep writing friend, and congrats on a well deserved feature... love Leke
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Date: 4/9/2009 7:02:00 PM
Oh, I can feel the fun in this one. Nice write. I'm still laughing as I ride off on my broom...substitute teacher.
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Date: 4/8/2009 11:55:00 PM
LOL... I think I had this teacher a really long time ago but we never thought to try this, LOL. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 4/8/2009 8:12:00 PM
Mc I take it she was a witch huh - Nothing worse than a broom rider - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
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Date: 4/8/2009 11:58:00 AM
so cool well written, congratulations on your work being featured, god bless you from diane
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Date: 4/6/2009 7:19:00 PM
Hilarious, LOL..."Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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Date: 4/6/2009 1:21:00 PM
~lol~ Congrats on your awesome featured write! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/6/2009 6:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your Awesome poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/6/2009 4:15:00 AM
MC, funny but it made me happy. Thanks for sharing and congratulations. Ernilando
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Date: 3/29/2009 9:15:00 AM
This is "wickely" funny, MC! When I was teaching, one of my students did a drawing of me riding a broom. I loved it and made him "Director of Art" in the student paper. Thank you for recalling this wonderful period.
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