Our Teacher Rides On Her Broom

Our teacher rides on her broom
she levitates on it in our classroom
she will snap and  then deride
wish she'll take her pride for a ride!

Our teacher rode off on her broom
and there was joy in the classroom!

Our teacher came back from her ride
and all the students stirred inside,
"How do we rid her?" 
"We must decide!"

"There are students in other classrooms
that also ride as you on brooms"
"They need a guide!"
"They want your brew!"
"They can ride along with you!"
"They  can be your new crew!"

"Fly to them now, that's what you should do!"
" We won't miss you, we won't be blue ! "
"Fly to them now, that's what you should do!"


Copyright McCuen 2009
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Peranteau Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 6:13 AM
Ya know MC...your going places my dear poetic friend ! Your writes remind me of my writes of many moons ago. Keep on truk'n ! much love, james
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April 11, 2009 at 12:21 PM
cute in a nice sort of way . i enjoyed it. but with the theme you could go a lot further and make it a masterpiece. the theme was original. jhl
Adeite Avatar
April 11, 2009 at 7:31 AM
great rhyme...great poem, awesome poet. this piece is great keeep writing friend, and congrats on a well deserved feature... love Leke
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April 9, 2009 at 7:02 PM
Oh, I can feel the fun in this one. Nice write. I'm still laughing as I ride off on my broom...substitute teacher.
Townsend Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 11:55 PM
LOL... I think I had this teacher a really long time ago but we never thought to try this, LOL. Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
Jordan Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 8:12 PM
Mc I take it she was a witch huh - Nothing worse than a broom rider - Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week, God Bless, mj
Christian Avatar
April 8, 2009 at 11:58 AM
so cool well written, congratulations on your work being featured, god bless you from diane
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April 6, 2009 at 7:19 PM
Hilarious, LOL..."Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. GB, Always Tyesha
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April 6, 2009 at 1:21 PM
~lol~ Congrats on your awesome featured write! Love, Shar
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April 6, 2009 at 6:31 AM
Congratulations on your Awesome poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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April 6, 2009 at 4:15 AM
MC, funny but it made me happy. Thanks for sharing and congratulations. Ernilando
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March 29, 2009 at 9:15 AM
This is "wickely" funny, MC! When I was teaching, one of my students did a drawing of me riding a broom. I loved it and made him "Director of Art" in the student paper. Thank you for recalling this wonderful period.
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