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Our Tableau

OUR TABLEAU A tableau of us, you and me, smiling. My smile hiding pain being near you, yet so far, our strangeness. Wish knew yours, Mama! 3/15/21 Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry Joseph May Checked: PS Grammar and Syllable Counter How Many Syllables

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/26/2021 1:28:00 PM

Hi Marlene, You have penned a touching and poignant write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a good day and weekend:-) Alexis

Marilene Evans
Date: 3/26/2021 3:01:00 PM

Thanks much , Alexis. Enjoy your week-end.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/26/2021 12:26:00 PM

So interesting what we see and don't see in our relationships! Well done Marilene. Congratulations on your win!

Marilene Evans
Date: 3/26/2021 3:00:00 PM

Thank you, Sam. It is very sad, we saw, felt and knew it, our family and others saw it. I asked her why and I never got an answer and will never get one for she passed on two months ago.

Joseph May

Date: 3/26/2021 10:12:00 AM

A somber verse, Congrats on your win Marilene, Very nicely done

Marilene Evans
Date: 3/26/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement and the compliment. Have a great day.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2021 9:21:00 AM

So poignant. I sure enjoyed seeing this one. Congrats for your win.

Marilene Evans
Date: 3/26/2021 10:59:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate it.