Marilene Evans Poet Free verse

Our Tableau

OUR TABLEAU

A tableau of us,
you and me, smiling. 
My smile hiding pain
being near you, yet
so far, our strangeness.
Wish knew yours, Mama! 


3/15/21     Tableau - 6 Lines Poetry
                 Joseph May

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Alexis Y. March 26, 2021 at 1:28 PM Hi Marlene, You have penned a touching and poignant write. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a good day and weekend:-) Alexis Marilene Evans March 26, 2021 at 3:01 PM Thanks much , Alexis. Enjoy your week-end.

Sam Kauffman March 26, 2021 at 12:26 PM So interesting what we see and don't see in our relationships! Well done Marilene. Congratulations on your win! Marilene Evans March 26, 2021 at 3:00 PM Thank you, Sam. It is very sad, we saw, felt and knew it, our family and others saw it. I asked her why and I never got an answer and will never get one for she passed on two months ago.

Joseph May March 26, 2021 at 10:12 AM A somber verse, Congrats on your win Marilene, Very nicely done Marilene Evans March 26, 2021 at 11:01 AM Thank you so much for my placement and the compliment. Have a great day.

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2021 at 9:21 AM So poignant. I sure enjoyed seeing this one. Congrats for your win. Marilene Evans March 26, 2021 at 10:59 AM Thanks, Andrea. I appreciate it.