Our Sweet-Sour Hour

Tamarind Candy to Eat
By: Feb Francisca Chaves 

In my loneliness heart of our night,
I closed the curtain and blown off the candle light,
Then I stared at the glance of the sky.
As they watching twinkling like a wink of an eye.
As a look up far in the balcony at the pearly moon,
We share our first night of our consummation.
He pull me closer through his arms tightly and I riding me up as moaned.
We making love and I have no shame of it.
He serve me a Tamarind candy to eat.
And we kept doing it as I aroused until the clock of eight.
I want this to stop but he keep clapping on to the top.
He made me calm by brushing my cave and dig a mine.
After that we wrap ourselves a blanket in the bed — sleep.
And rest my head and close my eyes to keep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Poe Kei Koh Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 6:12 AM
Keep going until midnight feb. Why stop at eight o clock. Anyways, good poem. U made my poe kei sweet and sour ;)
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