Our Sweet Memories

Remember
how many dawns
did we have?
how many mornings
did they belong to us?
how many afternoons
we carried to the meeting
of the nights...!?
remember
how many nights
did we do days?
were moments
only our... our
refuges outside this world...
Moments that belonged to us...
Moments when we said
that we were one
from the other...
We said we were
one body,
one soul...!
now mornings
not belong to us
anymore
we no longer have
the afternoons,
 neither the nights
we have further...! But...
i still care
 for our possessions,
all this still
in me lives...
and you what do
you say...?



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                 where ARE you now - Justin Hayward (moody blues)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 6/24/2021 11:28:00 AM
Hello Alaka, those sound like good memories. It sounds like a proposal to someone special to me. But I could be wrong. salute Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/25/2021 10:29:00 AM
Hello Alaka, Alaka I am pleased that you have a great memory of a great love. Your welcome my friend. Salte Darlene
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Date: 6/25/2021 4:02:00 AM
No, It IS not a proposal anymore.... It happened one day... Are Just Memories of a Great love... Thanks dear ! salute alkas
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