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Our Sunset

by Michael J Falotico

                                     the sun rose behind..
                               your smile I held in my hands..
                                      here till the sun set..



"Sunrise vs Sunset"contest

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Sara Kendrick Date: 5/30/2011 3:38:00 PM Enjoyed reading your creative work.. Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/26/2011 6:37:00 PM Michael, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/26/2011 12:27:00 PM This is amazing Michael.Congrats on your win.... Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 5/26/2011 4:50:00 AM So beautiful and touching. Many congrats Michael. Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 5/26/2011 3:31:00 AM Many congrats Michael on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/25/2011 6:21:00 PM Congrats my White Knight on your super win in this contest by HG with this vivid and vibrant write .. your Jersey Girl is in sunset mode now luv..enjoy another great win.. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 5/25/2011 4:47:00 PM Nicely done in the haiku form congratulations Michael. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Date: 5/25/2011 3:46:00 PM Congratulations on your win Michael in HG's contest. Love Alexa Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/25/2011 3:19:00 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG,Michael Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/25/2011 10:34:00 AM Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Michael. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 5/2/2011 1:21:00 AM oh I really like this one! Love the thought in your second line, very unique :) wish you the best in the contest :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/30/2011 11:35:00 PM One more before I log out...a very nice piece Michael, the joy of one in your comfort and heart... this was very nice to read... a haiku for your soul... enjoyed..p.d. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/30/2011 10:36:00 AM This had me thinking... Not saying what I was thinking *p Good luck for the contest ;) love Wilma Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/30/2011 6:01:00 AM Romantic and serene Michael.. as only my White Knight can write of beauty and romance.. good luck in the contest luv.. surely will tug at HG's wonderful heart.. I wrote on Sunset too as it is my favorite time to reflect luv.. your Jersey Girl in romantic mode...always and forever luv.. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/29/2011 5:14:00 PM Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara Login to Reply