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Our Sunset

by Michael J Falotico

                                     the sun rose behind..
                               your smile I held in my hands..
                                      here till the sun set..



"Sunrise vs Sunset"contest

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Sara Kendrick

May 30, 2011 at 3:38 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative work.. Congrats..Sara

John Freeman

May 26, 2011 at 6:37 PM

Michael, a pleasure to see your poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

Kash Poet

May 26, 2011 at 12:27 PM

This is amazing Michael.Congrats on your win....

Tahera Mannan

May 26, 2011 at 4:50 AM

So beautiful and touching. Many congrats Michael.

Dr Hitendra Mehta

May 26, 2011 at 3:31 AM

Many congrats Michael on big win in HG's contest with this excellent entry. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 25, 2011 at 6:21 PM

Congrats my White Knight on your super win in this contest by HG with this vivid and vibrant write .. your Jersey Girl is in sunset mode now luv..enjoy another great win..

Joyce Johnson

May 25, 2011 at 4:47 PM

Nicely done in the haiku form congratulations Michael. Love, Joyce

May 25, 2011 at 3:46 PM

Congratulations on your win Michael in HG's contest. Love Alexa

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 25, 2011 at 3:19 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of HG,Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 25, 2011 at 10:34 AM

Congratulations on your win in HG's contest Michael. Love, Carol

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

May 2, 2011 at 1:21 AM

oh I really like this one! Love the thought in your second line, very unique :) wish you the best in the contest :)

Poet Destroyer A

April 30, 2011 at 11:35 PM

One more before I log out...a very nice piece Michael, the joy of one in your comfort and heart... this was very nice to read... a haiku for your soul... enjoyed..p.d.

Wilma Neels

April 30, 2011 at 10:36 AM

This had me thinking... Not saying what I was thinking *p Good luck for the contest ;) love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

April 30, 2011 at 6:01 AM

Romantic and serene Michael.. as only my White Knight can write of beauty and romance.. good luck in the contest luv.. surely will tug at HG's wonderful heart.. I wrote on Sunset too as it is my favorite time to reflect luv.. your Jersey Girl in romantic mode...always and forever luv..

Sara Kendrick

April 29, 2011 at 5:14 PM

Reads like a winner..Good luck..Sara

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