Our Spot...

As I sit on the sandbar and watch the beauty around me in admiration I know that peace
and serenity are in Jehovah's creation. I sit here on this sandbar by the creek and
it brings back memories of which I do not speak.
 I think of me and him in the water, over in that spot. The water was cool and the summer
was hot.
 Holding each other, playing close, but never kissing. Its that memory I'm reminiscing. I
haven't come here in many years dreading certain fears but instead my heart feels whole
and complete,
without fear or defeat.
 I have survived and my strength has grown. Today that has truly shown. 
 I look at our spot as one of beauty that has taught me something and showed me the value
of a trusting heart and life does increase. Let this place not be one of sadness for a
loss but one of enhancement and peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/7/2012 10:23:00 AM
When I click on one of your poems I know it will be truly exceptional Misty. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:17:00 AM
Oops NO Soup mail, the way you have laid this out on the page is taking away from its beauty. aleezadelta@aol.com if you want help I can show you ;)
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:15:00 AM
Just wonderful, ripe with amazement. Soup Mail! Light & Love
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Date: 4/1/2010 3:37:00 PM
Wonderful poetry Misty, i thoroughly enjoyed picturing the scene >> James
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:28:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry with us today Misty. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/31/2010 8:08:00 PM
Romantic write Misty and a sweet scene too.. luv poems are the very best of all to exchange and share... thankxxx for your sweet comment tonight.. appreciated.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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