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Our Spirits Sing

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for Joseph May's Rondelet Contest:

Rhyme Scheme: AbAabbA, where A is the refrain

The refrain is 4 syllables, The other lines are 8 syllables

Our spirits sing when sweet tunes echo in the brain. Our spirits sing from the joy soulful lyrics bring. Great music does not grow mundane. May harmony forever reign. Our spirits sing!

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Paige Hind

Date: 5/1/2025 5:44:00 PM

...and may they keep singing! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/1/2025 12:55:00 PM

- Lovely spirits, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/1/2025 11:43:00 AM

Andrea, Such an uplifting voice in "Our Spirits Sing". Reminded me how important it is to find the clover in our every day lives. Something to learn, something to teach. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem's rhyme scheme as well. Good luck in the contest. -Richard

Jay Narain

Date: 5/1/2025 9:55:00 AM

Great poem.

Valsa George

Date: 5/1/2025 9:16:00 AM

A soulful poem flooding the heart with joy. Well done, Andrea.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/1/2025 8:47:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Our Spirits Sing" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful day writing away................

Vanya Evangeline

Date: 5/1/2025 8:24:00 AM

Such a lovely piece.

Yann Rolland

Date: 5/1/2025 8:14:00 AM

enjoyed your poem, and the tribute to music great music is not mundane, so true, you bring a very lovely poem, thanks poet

Ink Empress

Date: 5/1/2025 7:11:00 AM

Oh this is beautiful and so soulful sweet andrea! Is it for a contest? I love how youv written “ Great music does not grow mundane. May harmony forever reign.” amen to that! May harmony forever reign! Best wishes . Pleasure reading your poem. Sending you light always!