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for Joseph May's Rondelet Contest:

Rhyme Scheme: AbAabbA, where A is the refrain

The refrain is 4 syllables, The other lines are 8 syllables

Our Spirits Sing

Our spirits sing
when sweet tunes echo in the brain.
Our spirits sing
from the joy soulful lyrics bring.
Great music does not grow mundane.
May harmony forever reign.
Our spirits sing!

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Len Gasun

May 10, 2025 at 1:19 AM

Wow! Wonderful rondelet my dear poet friend Andy! I enjoyed this a lot and went to my fave. Thanks for sharing! Sweet Congrats on your first place win! Hugs

Unseeking Seeker

May 9, 2025 at 10:33 PM

“May spirits spring indeed”, as does yours, Andrea ~ warmest congratulations on your win

Joseph May

May 9, 2025 at 3:04 PM

"May harmony forever reign", Very nicely done Andrea, Congrats on your win

Krishnanand Guptar

May 9, 2025 at 10:54 AM

Back with congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Joseph May`s rondelet poetry contest with a lovely lyrical write. "May harmony ver reign" and your spirit ever sing.

Jay Narain

May 9, 2025 at 9:13 AM

Revisiting. Congrats for your win in the contest.

Paige Hind

May 8, 2025 at 4:37 PM

Congrats on the contest, dear Andrea! 2nd- that's great.

Duke Beaufort

May 2, 2025 at 3:35 PM

Andrea, sounds like a very optimistic view. It's very pleasant to contemplate. Smiles!!

Kim Rodrigues

May 2, 2025 at 5:28 AM

Indeed!

Paige Hind

May 1, 2025 at 5:44 PM

...and may they keep singing! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 1, 2025 at 12:55 PM

- Lovely spirits, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs

Quoth Theraven

May 1, 2025 at 11:43 AM

Andrea, Such an uplifting voice in "Our Spirits Sing". Reminded me how important it is to find the clover in our every day lives. Something to learn, something to teach. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem's rhyme scheme as well. Good luck in the contest. -Richard

Jay Narain

May 1, 2025 at 9:55 AM

Great poem.

Valsa George

May 1, 2025 at 9:16 AM

A soulful poem flooding the heart with joy. Well done, Andrea.

Paula Goldsmith

May 1, 2025 at 8:47 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Our Spirits Sing" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful day writing away................

Vanya Evangeline

May 1, 2025 at 8:24 AM

Such a lovely piece.

Yann Rolland

May 1, 2025 at 8:14 AM

enjoyed your poem, and the tribute to music great music is not mundane, so true, you bring a very lovely poem, thanks poet

Ink Empress

May 1, 2025 at 7:11 AM

Oh this is beautiful and so soulful sweet andrea! Is it for a contest? I love how youv written “ Great music does not grow mundane. May harmony forever reign.” amen to that! May harmony forever reign! Best wishes . Pleasure reading your poem. Sending you light always!

Our Spirits Sing

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