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for Joseph May's Rondelet Contest:

Rhyme Scheme: AbAabbA,  where A is the refrain

 The refrain is 4 syllables, The other lines are 8 syllables

Our Spirits Sing

Our spirits sing
when sweet tunes echo in the brain.
Our spirits sing
from the joy soulful lyrics bring.
Great music does not grow mundane.
May harmony forever reign.
Our spirits sing!

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Len Gasun Date: 5/10/2025 1:19:00 AM Wow! Wonderful rondelet my dear poet friend Andy! I enjoyed this a lot and went to my fave. Thanks for sharing! Sweet Congrats on your first place win! Hugs Login to Reply

Unseeking Seeker Date: 5/9/2025 10:33:00 PM “May spirits spring indeed”, as does yours, Andrea ~ warmest congratulations on your win Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/9/2025 3:04:00 PM "May harmony forever reign", Very nicely done Andrea, Congrats on your win Login to Reply

Krishnanand Guptar Date: 5/9/2025 10:54:00 AM Back with congratulations dear poetess on your top win in Joseph May`s rondelet poetry contest with a lovely lyrical write. "May harmony ver reign" and your spirit ever sing. Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 5/9/2025 9:13:00 AM Revisiting. Congrats for your win in the contest. Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 5/8/2025 4:37:00 PM Congrats on the contest, dear Andrea! 2nd- that's great. Login to Reply

Duke Beaufort Date: 5/2/2025 3:35:00 PM Andrea, sounds like a very optimistic view. It's very pleasant to contemplate. Smiles!! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/2/2025 5:28:00 AM Indeed! Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 5/1/2025 5:44:00 PM ...and may they keep singing! :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2025 12:55:00 PM - Lovely spirits, Andrea :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply

Quoth Theraven Date: 5/1/2025 11:43:00 AM Andrea, Such an uplifting voice in "Our Spirits Sing". Reminded me how important it is to find the clover in our every day lives. Something to learn, something to teach. Thoroughly enjoyed this poem's rhyme scheme as well. Good luck in the contest. -Richard Login to Reply

Jay Narain Date: 5/1/2025 9:55:00 AM Great poem. Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 5/1/2025 9:16:00 AM A soulful poem flooding the heart with joy. Well done, Andrea. Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 5/1/2025 8:47:00 AM I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Our Spirits Sing" write. "Good Luck" if for contest. Have a wonderful day writing away................ Login to Reply

Vanya Evangeline Date: 5/1/2025 8:24:00 AM Such a lovely piece. Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 5/1/2025 8:14:00 AM enjoyed your poem, and the tribute to music great music is not mundane, so true, you bring a very lovely poem, thanks poet Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 5/1/2025 7:11:00 AM Oh this is beautiful and so soulful sweet andrea! Is it for a contest? I love how youv written “ Great music does not grow mundane. May harmony forever reign.” amen to that! May harmony forever reign! Best wishes . Pleasure reading your poem. Sending you light always! Login to Reply