Our Special Day

OUR SPECIAL DAY

People were waiting
All seemed praying
The ceremony started
Everybody was excited

She stepped down the aisle
Thinking for a while
Holding a bouquet of flowers
From the top of towers

The man in the middle
Waiting for a little
He was so nervous
But his feeling was real joyous

They held each other’s hands
Facing God’s powerful hands
As they promised each other
To stay in love forever
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cangua Avatar
November 15, 2018 at 3:14 AM
I love the last stanza, beautifully written and well done my sister
Haniff Avatar
August 20, 2018 at 8:56 PM
this is such a sweet poem. I love the rhythm and rhyme. A beautiful picture painted in your words. great work. **regards Maryam <3
Nicolas Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 4:21 AM
Thanks for appreciating my work, hoping to read yours too. God bless.
Nicolas Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 4:21 AM
Thanks for appreciating my work, hoping to read yours too. God bless.
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