Our Space Forever Held

Important blooming beautiful 
in you deep inside true
loving the time 
I spend in your company
please never doubt me in what 
I have said 
Really happily 
thinking all the time 
of you smiling so sweetly
dreaming in a sound of one sweet voice
kissing echoes warm softly surrender
Loving inside deeply cries
you are an noble maiden 
who dazzles across sweetly horizons
kissing moonlight thoughts faraway
Your light distant sparkling warmly
as the dewdrops fall silver
glistening a starlight love
Deep within this path standing 
golden sands we walk together
dream of dreams you dance with grace 
with great joy embraced for eternity
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Petersen Potter Avatar
December 10, 2014 at 1:09 PM
Awesome! Another very beautiful romantic and dazzling poem Liam! Just perfect and so full of love and tenderness. A 7 +++for you! Your pen is just amazing my dearest friend. May you always feel the presence and warmth of God and all his angels showering your kind heart with all their love and peace! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
Mcdaid Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:39 PM
truly wonderful comment dorian deeply appreciated dear pal bless you in his holy name
Vaso Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Very very romantic, great write liam !
Mcdaid Avatar
December 14, 2014 at 2:32 PM
thank you arthur pal for the wonderful comment bless you
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