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OUR SOUL

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, NOON, 06 FEBRUARY 2017, MY PHOTO, ©

Our Soul

Our soul,

Resembles a ball

That 

Falls from heaven,

Bounces upon earth 

And

Returns to heaven 

Where

It is cleansed from life's immoral dust 

And

Stored for eternity on blissfulness' 

Ground! 








© Demetrios Trifiatis
     06 February 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Beautiful words and bloom, dear Demetrios! I imagine your rooftop garden is quite inspiring for poetry and much more...L&B, Rhonda
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February 6, 2017 at 3:53 AM
- A beautiful interpretation of our soul - A lovely poem, my friend - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 6, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Thank you so much my kind friend, Anne-Lise for your precious visit! Hugs!
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