Sara Kendrick Poet Quintain (English)

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My husband and I started dating in the spring of the year..Spring always reminds me of our young love..

Our Song Unsung

"There is something coming over me"
Love in everything_its amazing
Must be spring has pronounced decree
Great romance aflame blazing 
All the birds, crickets in song praising
Memories surfing corners of my mind
The spring of my life when we were young
The young love that we have left behind
Young love amazing, all reason to wind flung
Oh! For that spring again, our song unsung

Contest: English Quintain A Spring Day
Sponsor: Francine Roberts
February 02, 2012

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Erich Goller February 8, 2012 at 4:55 PM Spring a beautiful season,Beautiful expressed poem,nice rhyme..I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Joe Maverick February 7, 2012 at 10:56 AM You've got me humming along to this Sara,

Tim B February 6, 2012 at 10:05 PM Mrs. Sara, a great reminisce. You capture that powerful passionate feeling of youth and new love. Spring can certainly reinvigorate and spark such. You crafted with care to elicit the emotions here, and hit the right flow as well. God Bless

Jack Horne February 5, 2012 at 1:13 PM Beautiful piece, Sara. I'm sure Francine will love it as much as I do

Maureen Lefanue February 5, 2012 at 3:41 AM Thanks, Sara, for your kind comments. Yes, that poet was Helen Steiner Rice - I still have some of her books and some of her greeting cards are still available. Great 'Our Song Unsung' poem - good luck in Francine's Contest. God bless, Maureen

Harry Horsman February 4, 2012 at 2:35 PM What a wonderful happy poem, one gets to feelk every word Sara. good luck in contest. harry Harry Horsman February 4, 2012 at 2:36 PM that is feel not feelk. harry

Anne-Lise Andresen February 4, 2012 at 5:42 AM Beautiful Sara, like always !!! Good luck in the contest, hope YOU win !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

The Situation February 3, 2012 at 10:13 AM oh how differently i would have i lived if i knew then what i know now.

Nette Onclaud February 3, 2012 at 5:16 AM sara, i'm impressed by the grace and substance of this piece .. so inspirational!... gotta win!..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2012 at 10:52 PM Though unsung, it is just like a song. VERY nicely done, Sara. How are things lately?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 2, 2012 at 9:26 PM beautiful lines expressing much luv Sara.. am sure Francine will luv this outstanding write.. good luck..