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My husband and I started dating in the spring of the year..Spring always reminds me of our young love..
"There is something coming over me" Love in everything_its amazing Must be spring has pronounced decree Great romance aflame blazing All the birds, crickets in song praising Memories surfing corners of my mind The spring of my life when we were young The young love that we have left behind Young love amazing, all reason to wind flung Oh! For that spring again, our song unsung Contest: English Quintain A Spring Day Sponsor: Francine Roberts February 02, 2012

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Date: 2/8/2012 4:55:00 PM
Spring a beautiful season,Beautiful expressed poem,nice rhyme..I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:56:00 AM
You've got me humming along to this Sara,
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Date: 2/6/2012 10:05:00 PM
Mrs. Sara, a great reminisce. You capture that powerful passionate feeling of youth and new love. Spring can certainly reinvigorate and spark such. You crafted with care to elicit the emotions here, and hit the right flow as well. God Bless
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Date: 2/5/2012 1:13:00 PM
Beautiful piece, Sara. I'm sure Francine will love it as much as I do
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Date: 2/5/2012 3:41:00 AM
Thanks, Sara, for your kind comments. Yes, that poet was Helen Steiner Rice - I still have some of her books and some of her greeting cards are still available. Great 'Our Song Unsung' poem - good luck in Francine's Contest. God bless, Maureen
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:35:00 PM
What a wonderful happy poem, one gets to feelk every word Sara. good luck in contest. harry
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:36:00 PM
that is feel not feelk. harry
Date: 2/4/2012 5:42:00 AM
Beautiful Sara, like always !!! Good luck in the contest, hope YOU win !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/3/2012 10:13:00 AM
oh how differently i would have i lived if i knew then what i know now.
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Date: 2/3/2012 5:16:00 AM
sara, i'm impressed by the grace and substance of this piece .. so inspirational!... gotta win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/2/2012 10:52:00 PM
Though unsung, it is just like a song. VERY nicely done, Sara. How are things lately?
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Date: 2/2/2012 9:26:00 PM
beautiful lines expressing much luv Sara.. am sure Francine will luv this outstanding write.. good luck..
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