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its tuneful melody once touched our souls after the break-up like a gong, it tolls the notes that thrilled now just tremble like a frozen smile our song dissembles

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Date: 12/17/2021 8:03:00 AM
after a break up I imagine this is true "after the break-up like a gong, it tolls"
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Date: 12/12/2021 5:39:00 PM
Sweet songs can turn sonorous depending upon the mental state of the listener or the context in which it is sung... ! A tune can go out of tune in no time. Much food for thought Gershon !
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/12/2021 5:57:00 PM
I like the way you put it, Valsa: 'out of tune!' Time for a tune-up! :)
Date: 12/11/2021 5:51:00 PM
Hello Gershon ... and that song will remind us for ever - thanks Gershon - Lindsay
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Date: 12/11/2021 9:05:00 PM
Something about certain songs, eh, Lindsay?
Date: 12/10/2021 7:34:00 AM
WoW! Gershon, You expressed much sadness in a few words. Many can to relate to this . Well done . Have a nice day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/11/2021 9:04:00 PM
Let us hope to get past all sadness, as we move onward to Gladness! ~ gw
Date: 12/10/2021 6:29:00 AM
That's really sad
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/11/2021 9:02:00 PM
Sometimes, we get the sad and the bad -- before the glad! :) gw

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