Our Sin

I took you in soul and skin
I feel myself moving within
Taking it all to that point
Where holding in any longer
Would be our version of sin
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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February 14, 2013 at 6:15 PM
subtly seductive. Well done..... Jake
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February 14, 2013 at 2:19 AM
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February 2, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Gigno, hum, choose it or not, I am very astonished by your terms and sunken comparison. No capacity to hold favor... enjoyed~ LINDA
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