'our Second Chance'

In “My field of dreams” You asked me: “Can I hold your hand” In an attempt to “salvage” what was left of us It felt like I was “Free Falling” while we were “Exploring the Shadows” In between our “Two Worlds Colliding” Even though it felt like “The Closest thing to Crazy”, So “Erratic” at times We were “Flying without Wings” In the end that “Confused Space” Were swept away by our “Altered Needs” In honor of the “It’s all in the titles contest by Adam Hapworth”
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Macfarlane Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 3:21 PM
Wilma....all your titles flow so easily to create a lovely written story. Hugs
W Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Fabulous job, Wilma! Great songs, too :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 7:21 AM
I agree with Becca. AWESOME job.
Michael Ikechukwu Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 12:25 PM
Wow! Feelimg threatened already. Check mine out titled "It's all in the titles", please
Sathasivam Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 3:20 AM
Excellent. Very good write. Enjoyed. Tfs
Haick Avatar
August 18, 2013 at 11:55 PM
Beautiful entry, Wilma! Fantastic job putting this together. It's already a winner to me. Hope all is well! Much love, Annalise
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 3:17 PM
You did an excellent job. I very much enjoyed.
Gunatillake Avatar
August 17, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Amazing write! This is really good. Good luck my dear.
Sivey Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:33 PM
Wow, you have integrated your poem titles very well into this write my friend! I have yet to attempt this contest, though I think it could be very interesting to create! I truly loved reading this amazing piece this evening! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!
Horne Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 2:53 PM
love this clever write, Wilma lfde
J.T. Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Nicely done. I like the poem and the titles
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 10:51 AM
- Wilma .... just beautiful!! - Good luck in the contest, I cross my fingers that this is the winning poem! - Wish you a nice weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 9:38 AM
Sounds like a winner to me!!!!!! I was placed in a lovely atmosphere after reading this..beautifully written!!
Tacito Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:04 AM
I quite enjoyed what you did here. =) This was a great read.
Bauer Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 7:40 AM
this works very well and, without the quotation marks, i wouldn't have known this was composed of titles. nice job!
Hamilton Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 7:33 AM
very good write Wilma gl in contest Shadow x smiles
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