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Our Sacrifice

Back then your smile is blur Now your smile is like a pearl I do everything just to see your meshmerizing eyes Because i know your eyes won't lie I skip my meal every lunch Just to take you to your favorite branch. I don't want to lose you girl Like you don't want to lose me We sacrifice all for the love that bind us Like the driver took care of his bus The sacrifice we make today They can't take that away.

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Skat A

Date: 6/25/2016 9:57:00 PM

R-Dragon, interesting message for a newbie. :) I like it,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

R - Dragon
Date: 6/25/2016 11:19:00 PM

thanks for your warm welcome I hope that you will continue to support my poems and I also hope that someday my poems will be as many readers as yours :)

R - Dragon

Date: 6/25/2016 11:29:00 AM

thanks a lot guys i appreciate you all......spread love not hate <3 <3

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/25/2016 6:02:00 AM

A dozen of wings in just three small stanzas ... nice indeed ...

Skat A

Date: 6/24/2016 3:32:00 PM

So nice for a first post. Love it, skat

Moon Flower

Date: 6/24/2016 10:26:00 AM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, R- Dragon. :)