Our Room

We play the tunes
Oh lovers runes
For you and I
I lay by you in our room 
We make sweet love like for the first time 
Your body twisted with mine 
Every gasp is in time 

Reach higher depths 
My screams of delight
From each breathless kiss
Such intenseness 
My body moves like the roaring flames 
As warm as the candle that lights our room

Never felt so as one 
Emotion takes over me 
Your voice tender to mine 
A touch so unseen to me 
Innocent and wild
Oh love of mine 

My body is on fire 
Your eyes look into my soul
A lust so deepened 
Purity of our time
As we lay in our room
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 2:35 PM
Sarah, it's far too late for a cold shower. Behave girl > HOT STUFF >> James
Reed Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 9:09 AM
oh passion. I can feel it in this piece. Nicely woven. -Alan
Roberts Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 7:54 AM
nicely done
Hill Avatar
June 11, 2010 at 6:16 AM
lovely write..TAH
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