Our River

River takes love 
Fire takes soul
Angels open wings
You they come to hold

No promise opened
No eyes closed
Silent with moonlight
Your heart now exposed

Floating pure sweetness
Falling makes you quiver
Our souls make fire
Our love makes the river
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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August 9, 2012 at 10:45 PM
A beautifully passionate write, Jamie! Great metaphor and imagery happening here. Best wishes, Mikki
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July 23, 2012 at 3:49 PM
A lovely written poem Jamie, like it. - oxox Anne-Lise
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