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Our Revealed Love

She sat down on the saffron land threw me her scarf of roses as I land Hand in hand we were, and more I missed you, she said even the land Feelings were shining like ten thousand moons Hot aromatic love breezed through our tunes Heaven rained love's dew The more we get wet the more our love blooms Flowers enshroud our revealed love A sprig of olive were brought by a dove Evil eyes were shoved away Angels guarded us from above All stars were sparkling and melted And the dream was ended

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Kim Merryman

Date: 7/13/2015 8:50:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this romantic write! Love, Kim

Arabian Poet
Date: 7/15/2015 11:04:00 AM

Thanks so much for your support and sweet words

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/13/2015 10:53:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win with this beautiful romantic piece! Well done! Pandita

Arabian Poet
Date: 7/13/2015 1:37:00 PM

Wow, thank you so much.I appreciate your kind words

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2015 12:17:00 AM

Arabian, thank you for the support... SKAT

Arabian Poet
Date: 7/13/2015 1:34:00 PM

It is my pleasure dear SKAT

Kari Mitchell

Date: 7/6/2015 10:24:00 PM

Beautiful and breath-taking--especially the middle two stanzas. I love the reference to the olive branch in the context of what seems to be forbidden love.

Arabian Poet
Date: 7/7/2015 11:55:00 AM

Thanks dear friend for this kind comment and really happy that my writing suits your taste

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/6/2015 8:51:00 AM

your write speak in the heart of readers eloquently, you penned this so beautiful and sweet.................A.M.

Arabian Poet
Date: 7/6/2015 1:07:00 PM

Thanks dear friend for your encouragement comment And it is my pleasure it does