Arabian Poet Poet Sonnet

Our Revealed Love

She sat down on the saffron land 
threw me her scarf of roses as I land 
Hand in hand we were, and more 
I missed you, she said even the land

Feelings were shining like ten thousand moons 
Hot aromatic love breezed  through our tunes 
Heaven rained love's dew 
The more we get wet the more our love blooms 

Flowers enshroud our revealed love 
A sprig of olive were brought by a dove
Evil eyes were shoved away 
Angels guarded us from above 

All stars were sparkling and melted
And the dream was  ended

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Kim Merryman July 13, 2015 at 8:50 PM Congrats on your win with this romantic write! Love, Kim Arabian Poet July 15, 2015 at 11:04 AM Thanks so much for your support and sweet words

Pandita Sietesantos July 13, 2015 at 10:53 AM Congratulations on a fine win with this beautiful romantic piece! Well done! Pandita Arabian Poet July 13, 2015 at 1:37 PM Wow, thank you so much.I appreciate your kind words

Skat A July 13, 2015 at 12:17 AM Arabian, thank you for the support... SKAT Arabian Poet July 13, 2015 at 1:34 PM It is my pleasure dear SKAT

Kari Mitchell July 6, 2015 at 10:24 PM Beautiful and breath-taking--especially the middle two stanzas. I love the reference to the olive branch in the context of what seems to be forbidden love. Arabian Poet July 7, 2015 at 11:55 AM Thanks dear friend for this kind comment and really happy that my writing suits your taste

Afolabi Muideen July 6, 2015 at 8:51 AM your write speak in the heart of readers eloquently, you penned this so beautiful and sweet.................A.M. Arabian Poet July 6, 2015 at 1:07 PM Thanks dear friend for your encouragement comment And it is my pleasure it does