Our Past

As tears from the sky fell,
you were the cool wind that blew them all away
from our sweet paradise...now I dance alone in the rain,
wishing for the sun to never arrive...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Orsini Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 6:07 PM
Sank you! ^^
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 2:17 PM
Very descriptive writing. Keep on moving the pen. Sar
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