Our Own Sentient Universe

In a harvesting autumnal evening 
We gathered in the field of an old farm
Scattered haystacks all over,
Ripen paddy sprinkled aroma there,
Invigorated with hue and cry and loud laughter
Hide and seek we played,
Under the starry black sky 
We all sat around the fire,
Watching the grizzled old man,
More stooped he was than a year ago,
In the fire some straws he put,
Some bamboo pipes he filled with rice
And cooked them with the heat of fire, 
That night you sat by me,
Still I recall,
You and I were just kids, unknowingly
A bond we formed that didn’t dissipate,
Many autumns we traversed 
With ups and downs,
We grew up in our own sentient universe
Far away from each other!
There exists between us a vast expanse of desert,
A cadence of wind sweeps over my oasis
With bemoaning sigh of love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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August 7, 2018 at 3:10 AM
A beautiful tribute to a friend never forgotten, and apparently a love that is conjured up at will.
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