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Poetry/Rhyme/Our Natural State
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All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, January 09, 2024
For the International Contest, Our Natural State
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 01/18/2025

Third Place

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Our Natural State

 
Line of Inquiry: "free from conditional belief no agenda on our shelf vibrant as the light of self life flows on all by itself" Unseeking Seeker I have always since a young girl been a free thinker, listening but honoring my beliefs; yes, other peoples opinions and views still linger, but mostly, I just let them drift off like fallen leafs. I do like a good debate back and forth to a point, can calmly state my opinion to all; and always respect another persons viewpoint, but, lets be clear for no one will I crawl. If you do not agree with me I have no agenda, for revenge or to make you change; I will keep my beliefs and walk away by surrender, even if you think I am very strange. I am a peaceful girl and believe in self, and there is a burning light within me; my father taught me to believe in myself, and I feel his life force flowing and it sets me free.
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January 9, 2025 at 6:40 PM
“ to thine own self be true.” I think you’ve nailed it Constance. Terrific poem. Good luck in the contest cheers.
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January 10, 2025 at 3:38 AM
Margaret, thank you for the comment, compliment and encouragement ~
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January 9, 2025 at 4:36 PM
You had a wonderful father Constance, one can tell, love is all one needs to go through life well… Beryl
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January 10, 2025 at 3:41 AM
Beryl, thank you for the comment, I was lucky to have a father who taught me how to deal with life before he died which was the day I found my poetic voice and the birth of my first real poem~
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