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Mount Rainier "My First Love," Bruce J. Nelson (1922-2015), color pencil, 1997
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Our Misty Tears

It's my first love he said,
majestic Tahoma*
they named it long ago 
before white men settled
and claimed it as their own~
now misty as our tears.

*Mount Rainier is called Tahoma by Native American tribes.Tahoma translates to "mother of waters". 

For: SOME KIND OF MISTY Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud
Date: July 5, 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 12:14 PM
Great job. Also I am reminded of the Trail of tears the Cherokees and other natives had to endure so unjustifiably
Miller Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:27 AM
This is a fabulous poem and message, congratulations Chetta
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2025 at 7:03 AM
Congrats, Chetta!
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