Our Metaphors

I just wondering of your tone
The voice inside you it feels like igniting me from
You . . .
But ironically it’s not
I mean both of us are taken away to reality
And now still existing that our hearts beats as one . . 
When the moment our metaphors met..
Do I need to ask myself?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Goff Avatar
September 12, 2022 at 4:55 AM
Sweet quizzical (creatively, Amor) beginning to see how you term it "like note-taking" dropped onto the page in one fell swoop, I enjoy this method time-to-time 2 Amor, other times I cook up a theme that begs to see air, have just been inking in notebooks around my condo recently, more private thoughts, have a startling fun week my new friend! Jamesy
Otong Avatar
November 27, 2022 at 4:38 AM
Thanks xx
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