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Our Metaphors

I just wondering of your tone The voice inside you it feels like igniting me from You . . . But ironically it’s not I mean both of us are taken away to reality And now still existing that our hearts beats as one . . When the moment our metaphors met.. Do I need to ask myself?

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James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/12/2022 4:55:00 AM

Sweet quizzical (creatively, Amor) beginning to see how you term it "like note-taking" dropped onto the page in one fell swoop, I enjoy this method time-to-time 2 Amor, other times I cook up a theme that begs to see air, have just been inking in notebooks around my condo recently, more private thoughts, have a startling fun week my new friend! Jamesy

Amor Otong
Date: 11/27/2022 4:38:00 AM

Thanks xx