James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Our Meeting - Nighttime Musings

in flight my thoughts
dreaming, I wander to view
she, whom has captured
to see her my heart flutters
on arriving my eyes see

chatting we now walk
soon amidst our wanderings
hungered moments flow
hotel door now closed, we're close
eight thousand miles diminished

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Eve Roper December 22, 2015 at 7:36 PM Great write, James, good luck in the contest what stays behind doors stay behind doors:) James Fraser December 26, 2015 at 9:58 AM Hiya Eve, indeed :) Wishing you a belated Festive Season and a healthy 2016 ~~ hugs ~~ James xx

Richard Lamoureux December 19, 2015 at 9:49 AM My pleasure James.

Richard Lamoureux December 17, 2015 at 9:11 AM I met my wife in Mexico, she was from Vancouver and I was from Ontario. In n three days I knew she was the one and I moved to Vancouver. It is 23 yrs later and I could not be happier. I wish you well and enjoyed your poem very much. James Fraser December 19, 2015 at 9:47 AM Thank you kindly Richard for sharing a little part of you, very nice of you, and thank you so much for your lovely wishes. Wishing you and yours a Merry Christmas ~~ Olive and I...

Sara Kendrick December 16, 2015 at 1:20 PM Long distance relationships have to be hard..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara James Fraser December 16, 2015 at 1:23 PM We're blessed Sara, for it's working for us for 2016 isn't far away for us to be united ~~ James ~~ :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 15, 2015 at 7:05 AM Huge James, i'll never forget that time.. =`) months passed but when i remember it, it seems its just yesterday... =`) tight hugs=`) xxx~Olive Eloisa =`) James Fraser December 19, 2015 at 9:18 AM Seeing you at Ninoy melted my heart even more little one. Next time you'll be sitting beside me on the flight to our new lives. So many prayers and thanks to say to Father God for our paths to cross. Hugs of many from your Huge One ~~xx~~xx~~

Jan Allison December 12, 2015 at 3:35 PM Such a wonderful love story you and Olive share James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx James Fraser December 19, 2015 at 9:12 AM Afternoon Jan, trying to catch up on commenting. Thank you kindly as always for you kind comments ~~ hugs ~~ James :)