Our Lovely Sky

With stars & moon, lovely sky glows in night,
     with marathon race of clouds, day is bright.  

From scarlet sky of morning sun grows best,
sky turns golden red, when sun takes rest.

     Housing oxygen from trees, sky feels healthy.
     Housing countless clouds, sky is wealthy.
      
The flight of a hungry eagle, looks like kite.
Waving trees at mountain top, hugs sky tight.

     Birds fly happily chirping songs for the best,
     sky is their paradise and tree is their nest.

After blasting crackers and showering nectar of rain,
sky marries ocean wearing splendid rainbow of heaven.

     River sings nice after drinking heavenly juice,
     Lovely sky is our friend, invigorated our cruise.

Air flows smooth making tide in water,
air is son of the sky, rain is his daughter.

     Our flight flies better kissing rays of Sun,
     our serendipity is bright,made life  fun.

Don't try to pollute our blue bright ether,
Please never forget, pollution is our killer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
September 18, 2016 at 8:09 AM
A wonderful read, if only the message was out there. This world is all we got,... Enjoyed reading this one all over again. Linda
Schneiter Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 10:42 PM
Manmath, your poem is astonishingly, brilliantly image-rich. I clung to every line. Thank you for composing it and sharing it. It's a treasure.
Stebbings Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 1:58 PM
Beautifully descriptive, Manmath, and so dependent on us to control pollution. As you rightly say. Well dome, Barry.
Bhattacharya Avatar
September 9, 2016 at 1:26 AM
An unbelievably crafted urge against pollution. Good one, Manmath.
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2016 at 5:35 PM
hope you are back with us soon Manmath:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2016 at 8:24 AM
- You are missed, my friend Manmath - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 22, 2016 at 5:05 AM
Where are you Manmath? You are very much missed! Blessings, Connie ; )
Bear Avatar
July 22, 2016 at 8:03 PM
Well thought out and nicely written Keep up the good work Blessings Edith
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 3:55 PM
a great poem that begs kindness for our precious air supply. WEll done, Manmath
Y. Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 2:02 AM
Hi Manmath, You have penned a beautiful write. With a meaningful message. The last two lines had my full attention"Don't try to pollute our blue bright ether,Please never forget, pollution is our killer".Well done. A Big seven:-) Alexis
A   Avatar
July 3, 2016 at 10:13 PM
Manmath, hope you had a wonderful birthday. Stopping by to say hi... Luv. Linda
Dalei Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 1:35 AM
Thank u very much.
Muideen Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Year! Great, great! Meaningful gem........A.M.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 27, 2016 at 5:59 AM
Wonderful and meaningful writing my friend, Manmath! A seven!
A   Avatar
May 25, 2016 at 10:10 AM
A beautiful set of couplets, Manmath.. the imagery is amazing... LINDA
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 4:37 AM
- Impressive ... a lovely place and beautiful poem - I wish you a lovely weekend, Manmath :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Sounds like paradise, hopefully not lost.
Allison Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 11:07 AM
beautiful imagery Manmath a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 11:45 PM
Beautiful!
Hicks Avatar
May 16, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Wonderful thoughts for us today, as you celebrate nature with your words. "After blasting crackers and showering nectar of rain, sky marries ocean wearing splendid rainbow of heaven." ... I think this was my favorite couplet of yours ... we often think of rainbows as an arch, but actually it's a ring that always goes around the Sun (perhaps he's the one wedding the ocean sky together) ....
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 2:08 PM
First I wanted to thank you for faving Ko'Olina. I believe I have you to thank for having it picked POTD. I truly appreciate your kindness. This lovely poem pays tribute to our glorious earth and ends with a plea to keep it clean. We must teach our children to be aware for they hold the earth in the palms of their hands. Lovely Manmath! # 7 ; )
Salehi Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Very nice indeed... we have only one place to live...
Smith Avatar
May 15, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Very lovely Manmath...lovely indeed
Lariviere Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 11:56 PM
fantastique nice poem
Haight Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 2:08 PM
A lovely verbal painting of Earth's treasures, Manmath, and with a lesson at the end. Nicely written! 7, Sandra
Alexandropoulou Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:55 AM
Nature at its most vibrant, luscious and colourful moments. Lovely images.
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